29 April 2009

If Only, If Only( from my mother's eyes)

This is a poem written in memory of my grandma from my mother's perspective. I'll take any feedback positive or negative, any ideas on how to better word something, add something, whatever. Its not finished more verses are going to be added. Thanks:)

If Only, If Only

I only we had one minute left
what would I say to you?
I might've told you how pretty
you were or how your presence
lit up the room.

If only you could come
comfort me and dry away my tears,
I remember you've been there
through the storms of life,
my pillar to conquer my fears.

If only the strength you had
had lasted till your grandchildren grew...
you would've been so proud of them if only you knew



More to come...

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