If you guys can help think of a good title for this I would greatly appreciate it. You can give me your honest opinion about it. It will not bother me. It is a poem about love.
Once I thought the feeling was gone,
An empty void where my heart once was.
The passion gone,
The desire burned from my soul.
Then in an instant it all changed.
Your tender words breathed fire into my once cold shell,
Sparking a flame only your love can quench.
With you my life has meaning,
A purpose to exist.
You came to me like an angel from above.
Shining into my darkness,
Warming my once cold heart, breathing life into my soul.
Feelings I thought I had lost came rushing back.
They hit me like waves on a shore.
You may not always be near but I can always feel your warmth.
A sensation so sweet it makes sugar seem bitter.
I place my heart in your hands,
The safest place it could ever be.
You are my first real dream,
My last true love, my everything.
I promise to love you,
Now and forever.
No matter the darkest days,
Or roughest seas.
To only let you shed tears of joy,
To only know happiness in my arms.
Time spent with you it time spent in heaven,
With my own personal angel.
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Tiff you know i really like this
ReplyDeletethis line really struck me when i read it:
You are my first real dream,
My last true love, my everything.
i think you should use it
in your book.
i'm blank on titles,
sorry love
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