27 April 2009

Skittles & Lip gloss

This is a found poem. Written from a yellow pad of paper on which Abby, Hayley and I would write notes to each other in Coach Maberry's class in eigth grade... :]
The spelling is copied straight from the notes, so don't let that bother you. lol
Bless, Press, Address, Confess, Guess, Make A Mess...
Whatever feedback you feel like giving! Thanks

Just yesterday we were laughing abt
Skittles & lip gloss.
These days we cry because
graduation is almost here.
The friends we love.
We remember wat we've been though
And the moments
we love
keep us going
we'll stay friends
Until the end of
time.

Gracias
:]

2 comments:

  1. Very cute. Maybe lengthen or add a few more things :) I definitely like it.

    - Donna

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  2. I like it, but I agree with Donna lengthen it. I would fix the one spelling that slightly throws off the poem. Though>>>should be>>>Through.

    That's it. I really like it!!!!

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